I finished the scene I began to share with you last week , and made revisions on it. This was my effort to show you how I often approach a piece of work -- my own or someone else's. I commented on the revisions I made and why I made them -- but they are too hard to show here in an email. I really need Word with the comment function to show everything. Sooooo.... I am pasting in a link to a Word file where you can read all about it.
Notice how much of what I wrote is provisional. That's how it should be! Writing it iterative. You go back again and again and again as you lean more about your story and your characters and your point.